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Name:~~Whitefire
Age:~~17 Moons
Gender:~~She-cat
Clan:~~Nightclan
Rank:~~Young warrior
Appearance:~~She is pure white muscular she cat with fiery red flaming eyes that burn into other eyes and hypnotize them almost. Her tail is crooked but still functional. Her nose is also pure white with a pink tint. She is rather skinny despite the fact that she is muscular. Her legs are long and fast to catch any running prey or cat. the edges of her mouth are stained in blood like her claws... which are stained in blood from her own kin...
Personality:~~She is ambitious and bloodthirsty. She is sassy and has very sharp tongues. She can make very few friends and does have her nice moments which are found rare. She usually doesn't keep to herself and likes to lash out at others with her bad thoughts.Though on her sweeet side,that she bareley ever shows, She loves kits and respects her leder and eputy.She doesnt like medicine cats and thinks shell be bette on her own but she can be very caring at times.She hopes that some day she might find her love.
History:~~When she was a kit her mother loved her dearly despite her disturbingly evil appearance but her father would fight her and try to kill her. He one time also left her purposely in a wolfs cave and they got her tail but a warrior rescued her.Thats how she got her messed up tail. When she was in the meddle of her apprenticeship she stood up to her gruesome father and killed him with her fighting techniques her father had secretly taught her so she could be like him. After she killed him, she did take on in his footsteps. She loved the adrenaline when she had killed. She soaked her claws in her fathers pool of blood and lapped up a few drops and she loved the feeling of being a cold blooded killer. She ran back to the den cautiously and spotted her mother which was a perfect vulnerable target. While she was sleeping and nursing her second kit, Whitefire sliced her claws across her mothers throat. She lay there gushing blood and she stood there letting the blood soak around her paws, staring at the squirming crying kit. She felt sympathetic and took the Kit by the scruff and took it somewhere secret. She has hopes it lives and maybe it did...
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« Reply #1 on Aug 27, 2009, 7:02pm » | |
very good ice, but could u please expand on the appearance and personality just a couple more lines? then i'll accept it.
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« Reply #2 on Aug 28, 2009, 6:05pm » | |
woohoo! ^^ i logged in xP
Um, I hope it's alright for me to just point a few things out real quick...
You have a few minor spelling errors, but spell check should fix that easily. ^^ And none of your sentances are spaced apart. 0.o
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« Reply #3 on Aug 29, 2009, 10:07am » | |
oh ok sakura!thx for the tip.and sorry nighteh i no im still learning...lolz!thx im on it!
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« Reply #4 on Aug 31, 2009, 9:51am » | |
-waves frantically 2 sakura-
much obliged for ur help. =]
okiie, so i see that u have fixed up ur bio nicely, i'd just like a few more sentences on the personality if that's ok. and don't worry about it ice, bios are a drag 2 do. xD
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« Reply #5 on Aug 31, 2009, 4:53pm » | |
ok im on it.i might have to do it tomarrow.im going to the stables tonite...
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« Reply #6 on Sept 1, 2009, 9:36am » | |
that's ok, u still have time. =]
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