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Post by gracebunnylove on Aug 12, 2008 16:34:52 GMT -5
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5922/wolfpawqm6.png Name: Wolfpaw Age: 10 moons Gender: She-cat Clan: Wolfclan Rank: Apprentice Appearance: Wolfpaw is a dark brown she-cat with a caramell tail and muzzel. She has pink eyes that fade to blue in the center. She has no battle scars yet. Wolfpaw has a gold stud in her left ear from being caputerd from two-legs. Her tail is slightly longer then a normal cat. Wolfpaw is longhair. Personality: Wolfpaw is very hostile to cat's she dosen't know. If you get to know her though, and she excepts you she's just like any other appretice, Playful, friendly,happy. She is Very courious. She is loyal to her friends. One day she wants to be leader. She is nice to the leader because she wants to be deputy, That way she will have a chance to take the poistion she wants. History: When Wolfpaw was a kit her brother died. her mom and dad were killed by wolfs (hence the name wolfpaw). Later on in her life (first moon of being an apprentice) She was Taken by two-legs. The two-leg Took her to a strang place where they Piecerd a golden stud in her ear. Every time she tried t go out-side they just pulled her back in and yelled. One knight they left the window open. After sevral moons wolfpaw found her clan and was welcomed back. Other: Her warrrior name is Wolffang.
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Post by yami-chan on Aug 12, 2008 17:01:05 GMT -5
Nice bio! But could u extend the personality and apperance just by a couple of more sentences? After that I'll accept it ^^
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Post by gracebunnylove on Aug 14, 2008 13:17:52 GMT -5
Finished! ;D
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Post by Cheetah on Aug 14, 2008 17:07:44 GMT -5
Okay, I'll accept that xD One thing for the future tho, there is spell check in every post, and we'd really like you to use that:)
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