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Post by bluestarbabyx3 on Aug 16, 2008 16:14:35 GMT -5
Name:EchoPaw Age:9 Moons Gender:Female Clan:NightClan Rank:Apprentice
Apperance:I am a silver tabbby she cat with unusual green eyes i also have black spots on me and the tip of my tail is a dark gray In The Sun my pelt glows In MoonLight It Looks Pale I also can blend in with rocks and stuff very easy!and thats my apperance
Personality:I llove to learn about herbs It is my most prize position i love to hang with friends talk and hunt when i ever get a chance and most of all i love to meet other clans and learn about them I dont have a mate and im hopeing to become a medicene cat apprentice!I would like a mate but if i do become a medicene cat apprentice i know i cant take on one But if i became a apprentice thats not mediene cat i would love to have a great mentor teach me~:]
History:I used to be a kittypet and i loved my sister and brothers but they decided to keep their kittypet roots when i heard about the clans and forest from my mother i had to go see it then i ran into a clan medicene cat and she taught me about herbs and i started loveing to learn about them and the things they can help and do
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Post by Cheetah on Aug 17, 2008 7:53:40 GMT -5
Please use capitalization and punctuation, and add more to appearance, personality and history. Thanks xD
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Post by yami-chan on Aug 17, 2008 13:26:48 GMT -5
Thanks for making a bio Bluestar, but yes those things that Cheetah need to be listed. If you need help with anything just ask
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Post by yami-chan on Aug 19, 2008 15:08:26 GMT -5
It's better than before, so I'll accept it, welcome to Nightclan! ^^
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Post by Dragon on Aug 19, 2008 16:19:12 GMT -5
Hey could you please make your cat a warrior or join a different clan as we are very low on warriors for Nightclan and I cant get a mentor for your cat if you make it an apprentice. Sorry =/ You could have her be an apprentice in Wolfclan or Faintclan or be a warrior in Nightclan but not an apprentice....
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