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Post by icefur on Aug 31, 2008 10:50:46 GMT -5
Name:Emptypaw
Age:8 moons
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Faintclan
Rank:Apprentice
Appearance:She is pure white with unusual red eyes and black pupils.her claws are black and her whiskers are black.The stare she gives off is ambitious.Whenever she rakes through some ones fur her claws turn bloody red.Alot of toms can be attracted to her,but dont be fooled by her looks.The tips of her ears are gray and so is the tip of her tail.
History:She is very ambitious.She is bloodthirsty because,when she was a kit she was stolen by a rouge.She was so angry and scared that she killed him.After that she secretly killed her mother for revenge.She said that a badger killed her.Then after that,she tourtured her sister by giving her terrible wounds and making her suffer.Once her sister was proudly apprenticed,Emptykit was so jeolous she killed her.
Personality:She is,of course,revenge seeking and bloodthirsty.Cats suggest to stay on her good side or get killed.It will be hard for her to find friends and a mate.If anyone does anything to upset her,they better be ready to get ther ears clawed off.Since she is getting older,she is becomind a little more loyal to her clan.But she still kills for no reason.She would never betray her Leader or deputy.She knows that she would not make a good leader either.She always thinks the worst of things too.
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Post by Dragon on Aug 31, 2008 11:10:47 GMT -5
ok a few things, please please please PLEASE remember that there is an edit button instead of double posting. You need to lengthen the appearance and personality. Also if i dont have a mentor you might have to make her a warrior =/
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Post by icefur on Aug 31, 2008 12:36:18 GMT -5
OOC:Ok.im soooooooo sorry.this is my first time making one.
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Post by Dragon on Aug 31, 2008 15:03:26 GMT -5
its ok just lengthen the areas a mentioned above and Ill accept you ^^
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Post by icefur on Aug 31, 2008 15:05:21 GMT -5
I already did.lol!
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Post by Dragon on Aug 31, 2008 19:06:56 GMT -5
accepted ^^ If i dont have a warrior that can be her mentor i might change her to a warrior. idk yet ill have to check the alligences
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Post by icefur on Aug 31, 2008 19:48:59 GMT -5
Yay!thank you soooooooooo much!This rocks!
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Post by Dragon on Aug 31, 2008 21:30:48 GMT -5
ok i checked the alleigences and there are not mentors available even Silverblood is taken so could you make her a warrior please? She can go to war to if she is a warrior -bribery eyes-
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Post by icefur on Sept 1, 2008 7:49:37 GMT -5
yeah sure.
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Post by icefur on Sept 1, 2008 9:02:52 GMT -5
well insted of making her a warrior,can i put her in a diff clan as an apprentice?pleeeeeeeeeease!^^
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