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Post by Cheetah on Feb 27, 2008 7:23:44 GMT -5
Wow, its awesome! But I don't think we need to add the part with Thunder, River, Wind and Shadow, but start with what the last prophecy did and what this one is. How about
Four moons had passed since the time of the "Great Battle", in which StarClan was destroyed. The three cats of the last prophecy are continuing their lives with their descendants in both Clans. But not everything is safe, because as the new kits start their apprenticeships a new problem strikes... Disappearences and mutations strike fear in the hearts of all clan cats. Giant wolves have found the clans and see the cats as easy prey taking them out one by one. As more and more cats disappear 3 apprentices, one from each of the three prophesized cats litters, discover new powers- Wolf speak and morphing powers. As the apprentices struggle to control their new abilities the wolves' threat becomes bigger and bigger with each passing day. Can the young cats save the forest or will the clans be demolished by the werewolves?
I put werewolves as giant wolves, because the Clans wouldn't know who they are and they don't turn into twolegs, and I changed the first paragraph a bit. Also, i changed three young cats to just young cats.
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Post by Dragon on Feb 27, 2008 16:31:52 GMT -5
Kool it sounds great! Ill Make my bio for my wolf and post it here and on my charries thread later.
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Post by yami-chan on Feb 27, 2008 17:09:25 GMT -5
I want Cicadakit to be one of the kits/cats with powers! Though I don't think they should be anything drastic like morphing into Lions/Tigers/...well u know. I think they should ALL speak wolf but only when bitten, maybe powers is too much cuz other members might see this as unfair. >< Btw I really like the plot. How about when the kits/cats are bitten they obtain wolf like abilities, such as strength and killer instincts. Like a vampire type thing. Can there be a third in command wolf?
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Post by Cheetah on Feb 27, 2008 17:25:00 GMT -5
I guess that would work(the bite powers/turning) and Cicadakit can have amazing fighting skills:) Sure, you can be third in command, but there are only 4:)
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Post by yami-chan on Feb 27, 2008 17:52:36 GMT -5
Thanks Cheetah! I'm already starting to make meh bio, and btw I might think of something else for Cicadakit, but something within reason. Also can the wolves have powers? But again something within reason?
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Post by Cheetah on Feb 27, 2008 18:15:22 GMT -5
Um, they are already kind of very powerful...
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Post by yami-chan on Feb 27, 2008 21:10:52 GMT -5
Ok then, thats fine. ^^
Har har made meh charrie's bio! I'll post it here if thats ok.
Name: Van Riker (Short form ‘Riker’) (Thought I’d just slap a cool name together. ) Gender: Male Breed: Dire wolf Clan: Wolves Rank: Third in command Disease: Constant mood swings, personality changes. Looks: Personality: In battle he fights with ferocity and often extreme cruelty, rarely killing until his target has been totally disabled and humiliated. He has a massive ego, and frequently gives enemies more than one chance to kill him before retaliating just to demonstrate his enormous powers. Despite his thirst for battle, Riker is not without feelings. He feels deep devotion that ties him to his master, friendship with his pack mates, and possible affection towards his prey, Cicadakit whom he bites. He freely taunts and belittles his opponents, often allowing them to inflict seemingly fatal wounds before obliterating his enemy. It could accurately be said that rather than killing his opponents, Riker breaks them. He dislikes his ‘prey’ from escaping him.
Although Riker’s personality is very different when he is not partaking in battle or killing his prey. He likes to put on a guise of being ‘the nice guy.’ Meaning he is constantly smiling and always speaks in a formal and polite manner. He is also prone to giving long and detailed explanations, usually illustrated by exaggerated paw gestures. Riker has confirmed to Cicadakit and to any who care that his outer personality is merely an artificial image he fakes in accordance to what others have impressions of him, and hints that his true character is something quite different, being "less pleasing" in the eyes of others. Maintaining his casual, constantly smiling self, however, is vital for keeping his enemies tricked. Riker can also be portrayed as arrogant, cynical, and somewhat lazy when he has dropped his guise of being polite, sweet, and smiley. When he is in this faze of his personality Riker becomes somewhat hyper, violent, brash, crazy, and dangerously explosive. Perverted.
Riker has a tendency to act as if he were in the army; note the head band, scarf with silver pin, and tooth pick. He always refers to his master/pack leader as sir or miss, and has a habit of always bowing/saluting before exiting or arriving. When in battle Riker has another habit of starting off by saying “In the name of all that is pure and impure, souls of another breed shall be banished into internal darkness by Van Riker,” Ending with “Amen.” He also answers to yes or no questions as “affirmative or negative.” He has the tendency to pick up on two leg habits, such as words, phrases, two leg items, etc. All in all he is a pretty mucked up wolfy! xD
References: Riker’s personality is taken from a mix of anime characters; Alucard from Hellsing, Itsuki from The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, and a bit of Reno from Final Fantasy, some of it has been modified. ^.^ Btw OWNAGE!! (Saw it on the internet)
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Post by Dragon on Feb 27, 2008 22:21:01 GMT -5
Meh wolfs bio Name: Kadrimme (means Dragonflight) Nickname: Drim Age: 4 years old Gender: Femme Breed: Dire Wolf Rank: Leader Pic: **Credit goes to Kankakanka Click Here to go to the original location of this pic** Personality: Kadrimme was a born leader, she fights with a firey anger that comes out only when she is REALLY mad or when she is fighting. She can be pretty cruel when it comes to other wolves or species. She had to fight to get to the top and is not about to be some pansy and loss it all. Drim has fallen in love once and it was to a male that beat her senseless, raped her and when she had her pups he killed them to. She has guarded her heart with her life since then and has only opened up to a few wolves. She never wants to fall in love again as she doesnt want to be hurt again. ((She might fall in love during the plot if you want a 5th wolf to come into play it could be a foreign wolf that wants to join Drims little group...))
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Post by Cheetah on Feb 28, 2008 7:34:30 GMT -5
Awesome bio, Nighteh! I guess I'll start on mine, although I am very very very very lazy. Name: Hella Age: 3 years old Gender: Femme Breed: Uh...Dire wolf(thanks Nighteh!) Rank: Deputy Pic: Personality: I have to go to school, I'll finish it later.
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Post by xX Skyshadow Xx on Feb 28, 2008 8:31:05 GMT -5
I'll be the last wolf! But I don't think I have time to make a bio now.
Isn't kits with power almost the exact same as the last plot? I think we should incorperate some older cats as well. Maybe you could also make a plot RP thread for the main battles / most important or atleaset post a summary on this board because I was gone for a little while and found it incredible hard to figure out what had happened / what battles were cannon (real).
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